bigjonny13's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sadnos]

PENOS!!!

[Robot Museum]

Yay monster, you coloured it, looks great!

And congrats on the FP :D

monsterparty responds:

Thanks! I was super excited to see it when I got on here today! Best thing to happen to me in quite a while, so it definitely made my day!

[Star Wars - Hoth Defense]

Ah, one of my favourite scenes from my favourite movie.
And you have done it fantastic justice!

Surfsideaaron responds:

thanks, gotta love star wars :)

[Herr Totenhasen]

Sweet Odin's raven, that's absolutely horifying

ReNaeNae responds:

It's not a raven. It's a rabbit ;P

[Son of Neptune]

Love the colour choice here and the sunburst behind the head looks great.
I feel that his right nipple should be a little further to his right.
And the feet could be a tad bigger.

Flowers10 responds:

It's commenly know that men with small feet have tiny dicks.
Thanks for the critique!

[M&A]

You've really come a long way in the last year man.
You've done a great job here capturing everything, from the lighting to the proportionality in the bodies.
The one thing that bothers me a bit is the fact that you can't see the right female's forearm. Now, I figure this is due to the angle of the arm, but it's just a little thing that bothers me.
However, the piece as a whole is just great.

[Roofies]

While I think the background works, I feel the female herself is just too dark and dirty.
Her hands are feet are much too small and her head seems to be turned back past what is actually possible, it has rotated beyond capability.
Also, her left asscheek is just massive in comparison to her right one.

[Not anymore]

Very nice piece proportionality wise, and I am a big fan of the lighting and colours.
Howeever, it could be cleaned up a bit, as there is a lot of colour splotching and sketchy lines that take something away from the piece.

HappyEndings responds:

Yeah, will defo. put a little more into the clean-up, next time. Thanks for the crit!

[What Does Your Soul Look Like]

I'm a fan of the colour choices and the stylistic choice you make for the design of the hair.
However, I think that you make the thighs too short in comparison to the calves.
Also, the hands are rather large in relation to everything else, especially the wrists.

[M&A Monday entry]

It really could use being refined into a finished piece, because what you've got going so far isn't too bad.
The lines are rough and sketchy, as is the shading.
Her right breast and right thigh seem to be along larger than her left ones respectively.